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Hey, everyone! I'm that guy who occasionally raps

Mirsub Ali Fazlani

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Hey there. Known to most of you as that kid who sorta raps. Been makin' alot of progress lately and made an submission to YouTube competition. If any of you are interested, do check out these.






 
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Since rapping is my hobby, I'll give you some advice. The beat was pretty nice. Your flow needs improvement and also improve your clarity and pronunciation. Your rhymes need some work as well. But for a 14 year old its pretty good. Keep spitting and don't give up!
We should freestyle sometime lol.
 
Since rapping is my hobby, I'll give you some advice. The beat was pretty nice. Your flow needs improvement and also improve your clarity and pronunciation. Your rhymes need some work as well. But for a 14 year old its pretty good. Keep spitting and don't give up!
We should freestyle sometime lol.

Sorry for the late reply. Yes, we should collab on something ;)
 

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